Great scene, very intense. It’s a little uncomfortable cause you refer to her as a ‘girl’ and the guy seems a little smitten, which is creepy. Not sure if you intended that or not, or maybe I’ve just seen too many episodes of Law and Order: SVU. Solidly written throughout.

She’s a little badass. ‘nuff said. It’s no wonder Sebastian’s had a thing for her from the start.

Haha, thank you! I did intend to make the scene a little uncomfortable, and was hoping to set the reader on edge.