Inspiration is the song “Still Searching” by Senses Fail

I live in the desert and hike under the moon, and sometimes only the stars. I completely identify with this piece. Off to look up the music.

A bit sad but somehow comfortable in the loneliness and sadness. A few bits felt choppy, but mostly an effective mood and feel to it.

I read this while listening to the inspired song, and it was a different experience. I could actually sense the mood from both the song and the writing. I would change the first two sentences, however. It feels like run-on sentences to me. Other than that, great work!