Nice. Even without reading the tags I got the ‘Bloody Mary’ reference by the end. Great take on a classic childhood game, making it both real and something different. That middle bit has some run-ons or awkwardly constructed sentences that could do with some clean up.

Thanks for the feedback. I did that on purpose to try and convey how distraught and crazy she is

I’ve actually never done this before. To be honest, I’m a bit scared to do it! I have like a fear something would appear and then I’d die of a heart attack and it would be a tragic way to die.
I would be these people at the end mixing up how to do it.
Either way, the beginning was creepy. I was like “what is going on?” haha but at the end I got it. Really descriptive in the beginning though with the blood on their head and all.
Nice!