I like this a lot, well done. Your tart line is priceless.

Exciting and intense, though the only way I was following was thanks to the tags. Just some bits in the first half that were hard to follow or made me pause, like the line about the drips. I like it, but it was definitely tough to follow.

Thanks guys! I’m absolutely terrible at stealth missions. Second-person writing was tougher than I thought, will need more practice.