As an aspiring midnight rider myself, I love this ficly. Good job on the emotions throughout and the imagery of leaving the world in your rearview, cliche as that might sound. well done

Thanks! The song was “Dark Side of Night” by Foxboro Hot Tubs.

You probably didn’t intend on this but I got the image of this happening in a 1930’s noir setting. I think it was the second sentence and it’s “sleeping city” reference. Very thick on the atmosphere and enjoyed it greatly.

I adore this ficly. Stunning imagery… I can almost feel the air tangling my hair up!

Lovely, lovely. Great moment and feel to it, really getting to some underlying emotion along the way. Great entry to the challenge, even if I don’t know the song.