This is exactly how I remember this particular dream with no exaggerations(sp?)

(in·ward·ly)

I have left the main part instead?

Better yet, change your second wander to something else, like walk, lurk, traipse, haunt, and many more; all a great chance to infer intention or state of mind by changing your second wander to something more descriptive if you keep your first one. This is a great example how switching out one word changes the entire tone of the piece.

You did a great job, I was behind you the entire time. Dreams are hard to write, but you managed this one very well.

thanks for the feedback I edited the story and you were right, I like the way this revision confers more detail/imagery.