Great use of dialogue, good job with the accents! Really creative, and the tone got through. Well done!

I don’t quite get the part about dancing for the capn’s daughter. Overall, it’s an excellent story and, as defineinsanity noted, the tone was consistent throughout.

@defineinsanity: Thank you!! :D
@August 2nd: Dance for the captain’s daughter=a flogging. :) And thank you!