Wait- why isn’t this part of the World Building Steampunk Fantasy Challenge! It fits! Join us!

Unabashedly inspired by the ‘On Patrol’ series by Shu Sam Chen and Robert Quick (and possibly others, not sure how many have jumped in on that…maybe you should go add one too!).

Didn’t know there was a challenge. Ah well, I’m not much of a joiner anyway.

I absolutely love steampunk. Great story, and hoping there’s a sequel coming up to this!

For you and anyone else that might be interested-

http://ficly.com/challenges/956

We could use your talents!

The tension between the two characters is brought out well, really like the idea! Just a minor point, ‘nudge’ should be in past tense. An engaging, clear piece.