The break in rhyme really brought across the tone of emptiness in the first stanza, and the use of line breaks is apt! Great stuff!
Yes, you do write poetry, but not just poetry, this poem contains a story. I like this very much.
Thanks guys, I was pretty unsure about trying this actually.
That’s what makes Josh’s writing so good. It’s not just one faceted.
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