I love reading your stuff, you have a unique style Red, dark yet gentle, like someone with an innate ability to deliver bad news smoothly.

Definitely dark and tragic. It reminds me of that told Ricky Nelson song, “Last Kiss”, I think it’s called. Some of the early bit was a little hard to follow. I think you could do without the first sentence and just do a little rewording in the first paragraph, just an opinion though.