Wow this is powerful stuff. A great description of early morning and the stars followed by existential thought and finally a hidden gunman. You made them fit together seamlessly, I didn’t see that one coming until the end well done

Nicely written and set up for this guys rationalization for a relatively big, meaningful act which he or she has rendered insignificant by all this universal consideration.

what they said. :)

I love this. The vividness of the sunrise contrasts so wonderfully with the starkness of the final lines.