I’m not sure how well this works, maybe I gave the game away too early. But it’s practice and that’s exactly what I need right now.

I think you did a good job! I like how you used the required quote as the very last line, it gives it a good intensity.

hahaha, wow, I don’t think I was supposed to laugh at that… Ahem. I just didn’t expect it to go where it did even though I knew you had to use the line!
Perhaps you did give it away, but I went along for the ride. I did know where the character was and what was going on, I just expected Peter to be like, ’you’re dead and he’s not’.

With the title of the challenge and the description of the place, I had a good idea of where this was going but you hid it well enough that it was still a surprise at the end. Good take on the challenge nice job

Ouch, brutal ending and not where I thought it was going to go when you started. Nicely played for a painful twist and nice use of the quote.