Great start to an epic tale. I liked the mystery of a postcard as the means of communication. It seems to throw it back a ways in time, which suits the overall feel to it despite it being set in the present. You’ve got a double ‘me’ in that first sentence, and I don’t think the sentence about Iron Hill needs that comma in the middle. Otherwise, really liked the style in this one.

Fixed! Thank you, as always, for your input. It is appreciated!