You build the tension nicely throughout the piece. In your second last paragraph, did you mean for the protagonist to anticipate the knock on the door? Welcome to Ficly.
You build the tension nicely throughout the piece. In your second last paragraph, did you mean for the protagonist to anticipate the knock on the door?
Welcome to Ficly.
Thanks for the welcome! I am happy to be here. And yes, the anticipation was absolutely intentional. Felt creepier that way.
Loved blow the last line delivered, great use of voice and suspense!