And soon he will call me… master…
I’m always a sucker for Star Wars, post 1990 Lucas at any rate.

It was just the easy way out for the challenge. ^^ But thanks Robert.

I meant PRE! PRE-1990 Lucas. Ugh. And you’re welcome.

Hahaha…I totally knew what you were saying anyway. :)

Is force sensitive a title? I like the bold, but should the s be capitalized too or maybe not bold sensitive?

I like this, it’s old school Star Wars, the way it should be and always remain.

The idea is that the last child was not Force sensitive, and so he was making sure she knew what he meant. It’s just emphasis, but if you think it might work better another way, I’ll consider it. And thanks, I had fun writing it.

Thanks so much. :)

It’s my impression that italics are used for emphasis, but I’m no English major so I can’t say for certain.

I seriously loved this. You have an excellent way with words and starting the story out in the middle of an assault on the character was a nice touch. I also love the line, “…my throat still soar from screaming” because you never mention that the character was screaming up to this point, but when the reader reads that they make the sudden connection of “Right, yeah I would scream too, lightning sucks.” The whole thing oozed style and I am a sucker for style. And Star Wars.

Great job.