How cute!! I’m sure she was expecting something more, but still cute.
Thank you for entering!!

This is so simple and and very sweet. For such a simple story this is quite impressive.

This is so simple and and very sweet. For such a simple story this is quite impressive.

I love your story and I think it’s adorable. But I’m going to go grammar Nazi on you for a second.
When you’re using quotes, all of the punctuation should stay inside the quotation marks. And when the quote ends in a question mark, no comma is necessary.
edits:
“You never tell me that you like me. Am I forcing you into this relationship?” Zoey asked with tears in her eyes.

“I am not wired that way," said Martin, the typical geek that he was.

Marty was kneeling down, with a small gift box in his hand and a question: “Will you be my valentine, Zoey?”