Ooh, I like this one. The mystery of why he has the taste of blood in her mouth is one that I want answered. ^^

I like that you said you didn’t want to be the one ti do this. And yet you still start off creating the event.

@Night, I kind of cheated. This is based on actual events, it’s happened all over the United States, but a notorious case happened here in my state, Arizona. I wrote about it for a college paper. I had to use something I already knew, to hash this all out, but still leave a little mystery.

http://www.citizen.org/publications/publicationredirect.cfm?ID=4891

Well you did a good job, and there is still plenty of room for surprises and twists.