Superb! However… After such a brilliant and finely descripted scene that last line is written as an anticlimax. It could be so much more powerful in its delivery.
Superb!
However…
After such a brilliant and finely descripted scene that last line is written as an anticlimax. It could be so much more powerful in its delivery.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA)) Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))