I’m already regretting this. I may look at it again and hate it and start over. Blah.
I think this has all sorts of good potential, but it is a tad lackluster compared to your usual standard. Though I do particularly like the first paragraph, it’s very visceral.
yeah, I don’t like it.
I appear to have arrived late.
Make something new!
Maybe =/ I can’t think of anything good.
Lol this made it to the popular area!
The best thing would be if it got feature >_<
I shall rate with a cold inconsiderate heart. bwa muahaha*choke, cough, gurgle, ahem* hahahaahaha.
Vote this for feature!! lolz =) your title made me think: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LRT4IQ9TmRw
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