Quite well done.
In the third sentence of the third main paragraph, your subject (campgrounds) disagrees with the verb (is). You could change either one to match the other and I don’t think it would harm anything. Also, while I’m not going to say it’s grammatically incorrect, starting a sentence with “and” is a bit awkward.
These things aside, this is a very compelling, well described, and well paced story. Bravo.

This is the second creepy ficly I’ve read in a row! It’s really nicely done, and I’m interested to see where you take it. The obvious would be to have the girl as a ghost, but maybe it would be more powerful if she were completely helpless and unable to influence the world in any way – she just has to watch and describe the work of her murderer.

Thanks Memento, Sanglorian. Nice to get feedback. Memento, made those suggested changes, I appreciate it.

Anytime. Everything looks great.

melancholy, as the person reflects on the loneliness, but also creepy with the twist at the end. Well done!

I love this! Creepy twist at the end: I want to know more!

beautifully written, lovely story! And yes, pretty creepy all the way through in a most excellent way, but I also sense bitterness and anger. I like it. I like it a lot.

This seriously gave me the chills, well done.