Werebear! A bit of polishing might help this piece. You left out an ‘r’ at the beginning of the second paragraph. You should mention that they’re in a building before she leaves it so the reader doesn’t get confused. Also, the bold text is mildly distracting. Lastly, the Black Forest is in Germany, so your character’s Russian names seems slightly out of place. Unless that’s what you intended, in which case they function perfectly.
Otherwise, while werebears were not quite what I was thinking when I wrote mine, this definitely makes for an interesting alternate version.
memento
mark.i.wang