Is that place Neverland? *

This is okay.. Amazingly, I was not astounded by your writing ability on this one. It’s tough to write like this and I think you tried a tad too hard. My least favorite line is probably the caffeine wasn’t right, too much, too much!.. It’s just a little cheesy and also the part about depression is a little hard to follow.. But the ending was relatively good so it can be sequeled… MWHAHAHAHAHA

It was microfiction—again from the camp—confined to 100 words, in this case. It sort of limited how I could write it, but I see what you mean. I wasn’t ecstatic about it.