Where the hell have you been? It’s so nice to see you back. I like this, it’s good. You really don’t need and live to her hearts content., you do fine insinuating that purpose. This is primed and ready for a sequel too, not solid boundaries have been set. Nice job. Keep writing.
Where the hell have you been? It’s so nice to see you back.
I like this, it’s good. You really don’t need and live to her hearts content., you do fine insinuating that purpose.
This is primed and ready for a sequel too, not solid boundaries have been set.
Nice job. Keep writing.
Feels very allegorical. It might have been nice to give the metaphorical chains some positive aspect to match the positive aspects spoken of by the voice or voices. Overall a really nicely described bind, so to speak.
@32^2 yea..i take a sabbatical now n then to get back to work :D thanks..i’ll make it a point to keep coming back @thx 0477 yup..that’s a good point. Thanks!
@32^2 yea..i take a sabbatical now n then to get back to work :D thanks..i’ll make it a point to keep coming back
@thx 0477 yup..that’s a good point. Thanks!
32 ^2 
THX 0477 
Mystique