I liked where this was headed and I loved where it went. This was an amazing entry into what has become an even more amazing website. Bravo!!!

Slightly drunk when I wrote this, hazy judgement. Don’t know where my mind was flowing.

I like it though.

But, but, but……valleys are fertile.

I like that you admit you were slightly of a different mind. Your voice changes in your second sentence:

Drunk people do it all the time.

Am I wrong in thinking the entire story was written to essentially criticize and lampoon the first four lines?

Am I wrong in thinking the entire story was written to essentially criticize and lampoon the first four lines?

I don’t care if you were drunk or not, the honesty in this punched me through to the core. I’m just now regaining my breath!