I had this problem when I started writing. You might want to change this to present tense, to bring it all together. I’ve sent you a note.

Thanks! It’s so subtle a difference, I’m not sure I would catch that on my own. But I’ll definitely keep an eye on it. :)

Because people have asked me – The first promise is to help his wife die (the italicized flashback). The second promise is to spread her ashes in the grand canyon.