OOOOOH, they ARE the snacks! Munchables!
I don’t see where they are the snacks.. it’s been a long time since this series was written in! :) Go! Go to your mother and have an adventure!
No, they’re not the snacks. He meant there’s nothing weird about bringing snacks…but I was really short on characters. I mean, they may wind up snacks later, but I don’t know.
No, they’re not the snacks. He meant there’s nothing weird about bringing snacks…but I was really short on characters.
I mean, they may wind up snacks later, but I don’t know.
i like the dialogue; i got the snacks thing – i think it’s fine.
Like the characterization here, the dialogue really builds suspense. Well done!
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