Needs some work, but the story and message is great. was quite A measurement before Gallon? Zatarains? use either bowl or pot, not both if you mean the same thing. pot’s lip? or just lip. clipped onto? It sounds like it only hit the side, like a car clips a telephone pole. All in all, you made me hungry for lobster.
Needs some work, but the story and message is great.
was quite
A measurement before Gallon?
Zatarains?
use either bowl or pot, not both if you mean the same thing.
pot’s lip? or just lip.
clipped onto? It sounds like it only hit the side, like a car clips a telephone pole.
All in all, you made me hungry for lobster.
…..I’ve always had problems with its, and _ it’s_, you mix them up here too, but I’m not sure about some of them. It’s = It has or It is. Its= ownership, possessive. Replace all of your it’s and its with his, and see if it makes sense. In the cases that it doesn’t, then it’s, it is.
…..I’ve always had problems with its, and _ it’s_, you mix them up here too, but I’m not sure about some of them.
It’s = It has or It is. Its= ownership, possessive.
Replace all of your it’s and its with his, and see if it makes sense. In the cases that it doesn’t, then it’s, it is.
Thanks man; made the changes. Good edits.
Looks great, and still you. Nice.
I love the mentioned difference between snapping and scissoring, it does an excellent job of describing to the reader exactly what motion the lobster is making. All in all, this was really well done.
Nice work.
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