I imagine how the radio is voicing this, through music. or an old newscast. You need an I in the first sentence, probably I now rule a kingdom of dust…
I imagine how the radio is voicing this, through music. or an old newscast.
You need an I in the first sentence, probably I now rule a kingdom of dust…
Thank you for the comment, you always seem to catch the grammer that I miss I greatly appreciate it
I thought the ending was a clever turn, that he’ll have company soon enough. The third paragraph is a tricky read, maybe could use a clean up. Otherwise, an effective voice for the radio you’ve crafted here.
i didn’t think the third paragraph was incongruous, but i have a less finicky eye than others. like the tone.
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