a few grammatical errors. “its” not “it’s”. “Curves of each letter…” is a run-on. “The girl who pointed me out…” is awkward – i don’t know why. The subject matter is great; once that stuff is all cleaned up, it’ll be a trophy.
a few grammatical errors. “its” not “it’s”. “Curves of each letter…” is a run-on. “The girl who pointed me out…” is awkward – i don’t know why.
The subject matter is great; once that stuff is all cleaned up, it’ll be a trophy.
mark.i.wang