Well, I’m confused. I probably should understand it, but either way this is a very interesting and haunting story. I enjoyed it very much so.

No, Iris, I don’t think there’s any understanding of that. Not exactly what I had in mind with the snacks, but that’s Ficly for you. Funny addition. I’ll have to see if I can work with it.

Just in case you’re wondering what I was thinking, those crackers have salt on them and salt has often been considered to repel supernatural evil.

i think the “nothing weird about snacks” ties to the prequel well, but is incongruous with the rest of the story. you may want to cut down a bit in the first two paragraphs, and bulk up the ending so there’s less of a leap on the part of the reader.

i think the “nothing weird about snacks” ties to the prequel well, but is incongruous with the rest of the story. you may want to cut down a bit in the first two paragraphs, and bulk up the ending so there’s less of a leap on the part of the reader.