i really like your previous two sequels, but something about this one doesn’t ring right. i think it’s the use of “battle” where clearly, this is not going to be a face-to-face slugfest. i feel like you need something that implies something more covert. something more assassin-y.

We may just have to declare you the king of the epic series. You seem to have a few, and they’re all pretty solid storylines.

King of the UNFINISHED epics, maybe. I have lots of good ideas (imho) but turning them into a finished product is not my strongest point.