I realize I’m missing a period at the end, but I’m perfectly at 1024

minor grammatical error. "the probie turns red as he realizes he forget the last name. " – maybe in your edit you can pick up the last character?

Thank you again my friend. My little attempt at a series would be alot harder to read if it wasn’t for you guys.

It’s an interesting storyline you have. I’m waiting to see how you resolve the messy murderer (first prequels) with the tidiness of apartment 704.

All is going according to plan
Laughs Maniacally