I love it. Simple and straight forward, definitely a good use of the present tense to keep us right there in the rapidly evolving and terribly confusing situation for Tom. Great jumping off from my jumping off, creating something else I didn’t envision at all.

ugh. i hate the title.

Oh, I had read this. Silly me.

This is great. Loving this story you two are coming up with. The mystery, the supernatural, the western feel, it’s all fantastic.