Missing a few words: “it was from empty” " doling out drinks and"… Otherwise, bueno.

Storywise, very fun, especially with the turn around from Megan. The whole hand holding thing gave a very clear picture of her, which is then turned on its head by the sex talk and ordering of food. It feels more realistic and fun than some sort of continuity error.

Grammar-wise, I think the comma needs to go after, “closest one” rather than splitting that designation to insert the name.