It’s a bit childish, but I’ve always wanted to call forth an Elder One. :)
I’m curious, were you trying to write a sonnet? It’s 14 lines, and seems to be trying (be not quite making) to be iambic pentameter. A little tweaking and you’d be there. The Elder Ones might like that. Or perhaps, the chaos was intentional. :)
I’m curious, were you trying to write a sonnet? It’s 14 lines, and seems to be trying (be not quite making) to be iambic pentameter. A little tweaking and you’d be there. The Elder Ones might like that.
Or perhaps, the chaos was intentional. :)
No. I call that, “Ronnie has no understanding of poetry”. As much as I’d like to say I had some grand scheme…I didn’t.
Ronnie 
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