I love it. The tone is great, and the ending is hilarious. I didn’t realized I missed one, so I’m going to double back and read it now. Even with that gap, this one reads smoothly and is a fun continuation that continues to add a little more history to it all.

This is a great chapter, and I haven’t even read the one before it. The dialogue is good, the situation immediately interesting and mysterious. Good stuff.

This is my favourite part of the story so far – I can understand what’s going on, but there’s suspense building.