Great. I liked the characterization, though I didn’t see him as so singularly concerned with appearance. It felt like this was his way of helping or contributing, to be inspirational to his “troops”. I kind of liked him. Nicely written in any case and resonated well for me, having had to give a public address or two.
It looks like a series has been begun! Wonderful news! There’s a very strange thread of humor throughout. I like it! I like the chief too – seems to be a good character with a clever personality. Great sequel!
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