I like the title :)

Ha, keeping the humor, I love it. Little bit of a break from the tension in the previous chapters too, which is a good thing, yet keeping the danger in the background as well.

Great chapter to get featured, and draw some eyes to a very cool story.

I must admit I haven’t read the series so far, and therefore no nothing of the story. But this is a great little piece. You’ve certainly got my attention. I agree – great title, great humor. Congrats on the feature (belated) and if I get the chance I shall certainly read back =)
Abby x

Great contribution – something so mundane as a piss is given significance by their need to stay on the path.