Solid story. Nice job hiding the literal descriptions.

Thanks, it’s an idea I’ve had for awhile. Will probably add a sequel after I check out a few other stories and write up some other sequels/prequels/comments.

I like it. Pretty straight forward style, but by the end it works, especially with the reveal that your protagonist is a robot. I was expecting a monster bar with a human intruding, so I didn’t see the twist coming at the end.