Wow. I can honestly say I had no idea that was coming. Good job hiding the truth, I’m interested to see where this goes. This could be a good story from either viewpoint.

Small note, in the 1st line of the third paragraph, you wrote She stopped right in front of my,. Maybe that should be me?

Nicely done, great ending.

This is awesome! It was great becasue although you couldn’t see the twist coming, you could understand where it came from, if that makes sense, so it had nice symetry.