An amusing flow to it that belies a more serious message or thought behind it all. Nicely done.

Woah. I know the feeling. Much easier to be happy in dreams.

Maybe it’s just me but I always feel like a part of me is still awake even in sleep. I swear I can feel myself rising and falling through the sleep cycle.

I can picture this working leading into a sister pieces relaying the effect of nightmares.