Nice. :) I also like the citizen soldier sort of feel this has over the trained police force, since he shoves his way through a crowd. Hadn’t thought of that! Thanks!

Awesome! I’m a bit confused though about something.. who’s Elaine? :)

his ex-wife. I needed a plot device for why it would catch him by surprise – so i picked a divorce, he hasn’t seen his daughter in a bit.

This has a very suspenseful and desperate feel to it, well done mark. I’m starting to get a World War Z feel to this arc, I like where this is headed.

Ooh, chilling moment of realization. I actually like the amount of overlap with the previous one. It works really well, like a slight shift in the prism of perception on the scene rather than a chronilogical continuation.

I agree with THX 0477, a nice weaving of the previous two pieces to continue the story from a different perspective.

I’m a little confused now. I think you’ve taken it on a bit of a more serious note now. It’s got very organized quickly. I too enjoyed how you put elements of the two prequels into your own ficly. Some very nice blending. I like how each piece so far seems to have introduced an entirely new aspect to the plot. Intriguing (strokes chin).