The difference between then and than is important. ‘Than’ is used when comparing. Such as “I would rather eat a cake than a bagel.” ‘Then’ is relative to chronology. “I want to go for a ride and then eat.”

The difference between then and than is important. ‘Than’ is used when comparing. Such as “I would rather eat a cake than a bagel.” ‘Then’ is relative to chronology. “I want to go for a ride and then eat.”

I really like this, it’s surprisingly expressive.

I like this alot. It’s a really good analogy for these kinds of relationships and its well written. Good stuff.

you’ve really captured a feeling for which there are no words. beautiful. one question: did you mean “multiple tears” (like crying) or “multiple tiers” (as in there may be multiple reasons why its falling apart)?

you’ve really captured a feeling for which there are no words. beautiful. one question: did you mean “multiple tears” (like crying) or “multiple tiers” (as in there may be multiple reasons why its falling apart)?

Ghost in the Machine said pretty much what I was going to say. It’s very well thought out and I enjoyed reading it.