Well there’s an abrupt turn of events. Very challenging and yet another morph from one thing to something entirely different. What fun this ficly chain-authoring thing is! Nicely done, especially since it is jarringly different but still remains pretty consistent.

Well… Tom runs off into pretty much certain doom – unarmed, and unprotected. My plot options were limited…

Haha I like this series. It seems like everyone has a different idea of what Tom wants/should do but agrees to keep a mildly linear story arc. Good stuff

Yeah, it’s a lot of fun. Actually, i prefer it to sequelling off my own stories. It’s both more challenging and more rewarding.

This is great. Love the twists and turns this story keeps taking. It’s great to have action in these short bits but also with hints to a larger story emerging here and there.

The more cooks you have, the more strange the broth becomes :P

I think it’s healthy for people to sequel stories in strange ways – others can always go back and write alternative sequels and prequels instead if they prefer.