The idea is quite good – but you need to deliver so it’s appreciated for what it is.
Break it up a little with punctuation, to help the reader out. Also, generally, try to expand your word choice – you use a couple words several times (being, no matter).
Others: " being once was, it will burn"; misspelled intelligent; “or innocent a being is, it burns all the same. Yet nothing”; last sentence needs serious TLC.