Insightful without anthropomorphics. Very nice, and sad in a very unassuming way. The parallel structure is nearly perfect, perhaps a tiny tweak could make it better. But really, it’s beautiful.

Funny and sad little poem about the life of an insect in suburbia. Makes me glad I’m a person…and that my lawn doesn’t have any grass. Just rocks. That first line drew me right in, just a nice flow to it.