Interesting premise, but maybe a little too much crammed into one ficly. I would say sequel/prequel to let us know a little more about what’s going on here but I like the idea you have here.

I didn’t feel this was cramped. Sometimes, an accident in space while peeing, happens to be an inspiring parable for the power of the mind. Am i right?

I’m kinda in the middle on this one. IMHO it just needs a little tidy up: in the last sentence-paragraph …think of a what… should be …think of what a…