ha, interesting take. I love the furturistic setting and how he is wishing er thinking about living back in mordern time. Nice flow and tone and overall, nice peice.

Great story, reminds me of the chronicles of chrestomanci

I’m a huge fan of these sorts of stories that take the fantastical and make it mundane to the characters. It’s not necessarily a new idea, but it’s almost always makes for a fun read.

I like this story, good flow and I got a good sense of this world. Now we need more.