I love this chapter. It’s fantastic. The little children banding together, the comment about “his weekend” is perfect. This is a really great continuation.

Fantastic sequel. I agree with Ben on the “weekend” comment in the story, it was an excellent detail in the story.

So, David was Tricia’s dad, I think, and could Frank have been the twins’ dad? I love the rogue teens, fighting to survive. They have to be the key to the success of some future mission, they just have to. :)

i’ll leave that up to the next ficleter. my original intent is that Frank is the twins father. but there’s lots of other possibilities for plot lines – there’s the obvious Tricia/Lee romance, the less obvious Tricia/Blake/Lee triangle (pulling that off might be too ambitious), plus, with twins – if you lose one, you have a backup. Oh and at some point David and Tricia will reunite. Or will they?

I smell NYT best seller!!!