I honestly don’t have an open mind in the morning whatsoever to try to figure out what this is about but it’s got me interested to find out more whether there is a story or not. the open ending leaves me hanging but sometimes writing is better like that.

Distinct supernatural feel. but also puzzled. There’s just not enough material there to figure out what this is about yet.

mark.i.wang, I know what you mean about not enough. This was my first attempt at writing anything for almost 20 years. I think I was more concerned about mood than narrative. Maybe there’s enough life in it to add flesh to the bones.